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T O P I C R E V I E WMetalAphroditeThere is a part of me that aches for youI am a star borne of frustration and fearAnd in anxiety, I longed to hold you dearNamesakes and earthquakes,I found you between aggravating platesYour lips full and inviting as they pursedPuckering sweet, I felt incomplete as the Day dawned from another sleepless nightDreamless wondering fast beyond twilightWho are you to laugh as if you knew?Who am I to cry with camels in needle's eye?My love, you are more than my heartI crafted this body so you could embrace meI recognized you through the twinkling of eyesThat long held forgotten love songs glitteringAcross the milky galaxy's simpering fingertipsRandallPassionate!PearltyBeautiful,especially your last few lines..wow!"My love, you are more than my heartI crafted this body so you could embrace meI recognized you through the twinkling of eyesThat long held forgotten love songs glitteringAcross the milky galaxy's simpering fingertips" Swift FreezeIt's absolutely beautiful.------------------Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.MetalAphroditeThanks for the wonderful comments ^^. I really appreciate them! It was a spur of the moment poem for my bf that I haven't shown him. Maybe I should o__o;;!mirage29Powerful and Beautiful, MetalAphrodite!I hope your bf will 'hear' and appreciate your gifts!Your reference to the "camels" in the "needle's eye" makes me think back to this song...(music) I Who Have Nothing (Candice Glover) [3:19] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VpgWD9SOsxo
"My love, you are more than my heartI crafted this body so you could embrace meI recognized you through the twinkling of eyesThat long held forgotten love songs glitteringAcross the milky galaxy's simpering fingertips"
------------------Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.
I hope your bf will 'hear' and appreciate your gifts!
Your reference to the "camels" in the "needle's eye" makes me think back to this song...
(music) I Who Have Nothing (Candice Glover) [3:19] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VpgWD9SOsxo
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